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Friday 19 May 2017

Why is facebook not good for children?

we are learning to write a persuasive writing.
I hope that you like my story and can you tell me what you think.

1 comment:

  1. Hi i'm Pippa from Paroa School I see your point about children going on facebook and the inappropriate things they might see. Maybe next time you could slow your slides down and post a video of you reading it to show people like me how you want it to be read and read over it to make it make sense because some of the slides didn't make sense.
    Remember to check out my blog at http://paroagreypippar.blogspot.co.nz/ bye

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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about