Kia Ora this week my class and I, are working on making advertisements, i hope that you like how my advertisement looks and thank you for reading my slides.
Hi I emailed you with the email on the screen and said Hi burt it said email not found! Is it because you want to hide your own email! please look at my blog the link is http://paroagreyellas.blogspot.co.nz/
wow it must be a pretty good hover board if it is that price!!!!! hi this was cool i liked how you telled us more about the product you where selling but to be btb you sholud tell us more for example you sholud tell us more about things like how much rust has it got on the bike or how long does it take to charge the hover bored and things like that but this was really cool and i want to do that go check out my blog just put theis link into a tab http://paroagreycaitlinb.blogspot.co.nz/ thanks caitlin
hi I was wanting to buy this bike and hover board, but came over an error. your email address doesn't work. please fix this or tell me how I can talk to you to sort out the details of buying this bike and hover board.
wow that must be a really good overboard if it is that big of price also I think that bike is good too. I would really want it.come check out my blog at http://paroagreyrheaw.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Jasmine,Your advertisement is amazing it explain the price and everything. If you were to sell a bike in real life how much would it cost like would the price be the same or different but just to say love the effort you put in this presentation about your advertisement. Also I like the way you put in the facts about the bike and making people wanting to buy your bike because it a good price and it's worth it.
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Hi I emailed you with the email on the screen and said Hi burt it said email not found! Is it because you want to hide your own email! please look at my blog the link is http://paroagreyellas.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteCheers Ella!!!!!!!
wow it must be a pretty good hover board if it is that price!!!!! hi this was cool i liked how you telled us more about the product you where selling but to be btb you sholud tell us more for example you sholud tell us more about things like how much rust has it got on the bike or how long does it take to charge the hover bored and things like that but this was really cool and i want to do that go check out my blog just put theis link into a tab http://paroagreycaitlinb.blogspot.co.nz/ thanks caitlin
ReplyDeletei will buy the hoverboard
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ReplyDeleteI was wanting to buy this bike and hover board, but came over an error. your email address doesn't work. please fix this or tell me how I can talk to you to sort out the details of buying this bike and hover board.
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wow that must be a really good overboard if it is that big of price also I think that bike is good too. I would really want it.come check out my blog at http://paroagreyrheaw.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeletedear jamsmine that is a rip off even for the hover board my cousin ought 1 for 300 thanks i think you should lower the price
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine,Your advertisement is amazing it explain the price and everything. If you were to sell a bike in real life how much would it cost like would the price be the same or different but just to say love the effort you put in this presentation about your advertisement. Also I like the way you put in the facts about the bike and making people wanting to buy your bike because it a good price and it's worth it.
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