Hi Jasmine I really like how you put in the pink colour to make it stand out and also I like how you are filling up the space diagram but maybe next time you could put in more bright colours to make it stand out more.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you put in the pink colour to make it stand out and also I like how you are filling up the space diagram but maybe next time you could put in more bright colours to make it stand out more.